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monalisa overdrive by doodie monalisa overdrive by doodie
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alterion Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2005
this is so close to being a perfect wall for me that i am gonna work on it and just fiddle w it for 5 mins.. the 2d is ever so slighhty overdone in places but it would be criminal not to +fav this nonetheless
Syretrip Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2005
Thats an awesome render. Id love to see it bigger.
Keep it up
nathanspotts Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2005  Professional Photographer
Don't like the tech and small text. The subtle background lines, the render itself (and lighting), and the brushwork are great though. Very nice piece overall.
JoelAtlas Featured By Owner May 27, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
juno reactor \o/
criminalart Featured By Owner May 9, 2005
This is so beautiful :)
I just think that the 2d on the left should be a bit more smaller and the other 2 elements should be placed in a certain order around the visual field of the piece.

Rest is so neat :thumbsup:
ag-plus Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2005   Digital Artist
Mmm that is stylish as hell. Love the colors, the minimalism.
ap0s Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
pretteh cool... except for the name
redniet Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2005
small, crazy render
ggarfield Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2005
lisa :+fav:!
instrukt Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2004  Professional Interface Designer
Got a few problems with this.

1. The 3 lines you have curving in from the left just hang there in space, no real purpose to add to the design. It's like you started em but never finished em.
2. The render is extremely compact and could be more expansive, to spead some of the detail out. There's so much at that focal point that it ends up just being a cluttered mess.
3. Your small text, microtext, and 2d work that have been sporadically placed around your piece don't seem to serve any real purpose as a design element, whether or not the text means anything doesn't matter, it's the placement of the text and its associated 2d work that matters. The 2d can be used to frame elements to a location so the eye moves with the piece and follows a path you set by using certain grid elements, thick lines and progressive text.

The one thing I am glad about (and this just may be a coincidence) is that when you used the title "Mona Lisa Overdrive" based off of the song of the same name by Juno Reactor (for the matrix movies) you kept it dark, like the song. The problem with this, however, is that the song isn't very minimal, it's exceedingly intricate and fast so I'm not so sure the title fits the piece in this situation. I suggest you pick a title first (if you hadn't already) and work your piece to convey the emotion or feeling that title portrays, or go the hard way and design first but then you really have to do some typographical research ( to find a word or phrase that accurately depicts the image. In this case it seems you did the latter so give the first suggestion a try.
doodie Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2004
thanks for the constructive comment, i will work on it :D
SnowAngel- Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2004
I'm with nightie
i-04 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2004
color and render are just :heart:
ekion Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2004  Professional Filmographer
really cool colour and render, awesome composition and space !!
great job ! +fav
mirrormirror Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2004
Mmm, Gibson. ^^;
Ethernity Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2004
love it
nightinga1e Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2004
Dude, the abstract fucking rocks (ie brushing/render). But you ruined it with too much 2D. IMO, it'd look fine without any. ;)
crump3t Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2004  Professional Digital Artist
=] cool stuff
xpunx Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2004
nice render
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